Super Karate Monkey Death Car ([info]frecklefaerie) wrote,
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Mo on the Media

Spurred on by this post by [info]mark_argent I have decided to do an analysis of the quote's presentation on the various transcripts. Here is the original quote, sans punctuation and capitalization of non-proper nouns:

the truth of the matter is if you listen carefully Saddam would still be in power if he were president of the United States and the world would be a lot better off

A. Here we have the Commission on Presidential Debates, the Washington Post, and CNN.com:
The truth of that matter is, if you listen carefully, Saddam would still be in power if he were the president of the United States, "And the world would be a lot better off."

B. Next is the New York Times:
The truth of the matter is if you listen carefully Saddam would still be in power if he were the president of the United States. And the world would be a lot better off.

C. The Sacramento Bee, as transcribed by e-Media Millworks, Inc.:
The truth of that matter is, if you listen carefully, Saddam would still be in power if he were the president of the United States, And the world would be a lot better off.

D. Both the PR Newswire and Yahoo News do this:
The truth of the matter is, if you listen carefully, Saddam would still be in power if he were the President of the United States, and the world would be a lot better off. [sic]

Version A punctuates Bush's statement as if he meant it. With the quotes around the last clause those news sources cause the reader to understand the Bush using sarcasm to illustrate a point. However, it is awkward, even in context, since those sites had Bush quoting Kerry just before. Versions B and C present the quote as a mistake, and even call attention to it by having the last clause be a stand-alone statement. Although version C is grammatically incorrect, because it is written with either the comma instead of a period or an accidental capitalization, the effect is most similar to version B.

The most striking of these transcripts is Version D. This one actually calls attention to the mistake with the "[sic]" which was most used by most of the sites when Bush said "internets" and called Kerry "Kennedy" and when Kerry said "OGBYNs."

I would like to suggest the following examples for punctuating the quote:

The truth of the matter is! If you listen, carefully Saddam would still be in power if he were president of the United States, and the world would be a lot better off.

The truth [sic] of the matter is, "If you listen carefully." "Saddam" would still be in power if he were President of the United States and the World. Would be a lot better off?

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[info]ex_finalgirl515

October 9 2004, 13:27:40 UTC 7 years ago

awesomeness

that is truly bizarre.

did you ever have to do the "a woman without her man is nothing" exercise? "a woman: without her, man is nothing." "a woman, without her man, is nothing." "a woman without, her man is nothing." etc.

damn unreliable english language.

[info]frecklefaerie

October 11 2004, 10:03:48 UTC 7 years ago

Re: awesomeness

It is a little weird, but I figure that the news outlets who used quotes must have done so to cover Bush's ass.

[info]rebelzero

October 10 2004, 19:25:13 UTC 7 years ago

See Smith, Derrida was right. And now he's dead. Must be another political conspiracy.

BTW, this is Goldenberg. Hope all is well in your world

[info]frecklefaerie

October 11 2004, 10:02:52 UTC 7 years ago

Wowie!!! I wrote last year about how much I missed you, and now you find me! I'm doing okay! I can't stop using exclamation points!

[info]rebelzero

October 11 2004, 11:59:01 UTC 7 years ago

well...
here I be...
ever notice how ellipses are more addictive than exclamation points...

[info]dj_ango

October 12 2004, 02:51:03 UTC 7 years ago

Hey Brian!

It's Shannon. Good to see you on lj. I'll keep up with you, too.

[info]dj_ango

October 11 2004, 04:40:06 UTC 7 years ago

omg

Wow. This is a great post.
I don't think it's the subtlety of the English language but, more likely, Bush's ignorance of said language.
Still let's not forget the real issue: Kerry would have given Saddam a bj in the oval office while he was president of France. And we are better off.

[info]frecklefaerie

October 11 2004, 10:04:25 UTC 7 years ago

Re: omg

Is France a happy place with President Kerry?

[info]rebelzero

October 11 2004, 11:57:56 UTC 7 years ago

Re: omg

only at Eurodisney

[info]dj_ango

October 12 2004, 02:49:10 UTC 7 years ago

Re: omg

well, the standing rule is "no politics in class". But the kids ask if I like Bush (and first want to say that I prefer men, but refrain) so i shake my head "no" vigorously and tell them "no politics." They're happy with that.
To answer your question: The French are very happy that Kerry defeated Godzilla and eats bush every day in the oval office when Saddam is president.
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